Brilliant!
your artwork is gorgeous, and you did a fantastic job on body proportions and shading *applause*. Keep up the good work, your very talented!
If you think the quality of your work is decreasing, maybe just slow down a little? (Ack... why would I ever suggest that?? I'm so friggin' eager...) The only shot where I can maybe see what you're talking about is the last one, mainly on Seth... I love the sketchy qualities you always have in your shading and linework, but it almost feels like there is too much there.
And top right corner... holy shit Tom looks like my boyfriend. I think it's because of his nose, and the fact that usually the view of Tom is from his other side. I wouldn't say that if it weren't freakily shouting at me. But damn. Wow.
Love Valefor leaning up against the doorframe like that, looking slightly casual.